Talk:Frenetic Five

From my point of view, the biggest problem of this article is it is unclear which parts are actually "quotes". And some parts seem to me not quotes, but descriptions of scenes, and it doesn't belong to our contents ... --Aphaia 3 July 2005 10:01 (UTC)

they are all quotes from the games. — boredzo (talk) 2005-07-03 11:04:21 (UTC)

Games, you say, not "a game". But it is unclear from the article itself. You need to give those information. (published year or the game maker and so on). That is partly why I feel it lacks cleanup currently. It might be clear for you what it is, but for other readers, it is unclear. --Aphaia 3 July 2005 11:27 (UTC)

I have a suggestion up in Talk:Frenetic Five/Alternative for a more readable style of quotes. Please let me know what you think. ~ MosheZadka (Talk) 3 July 2005 11:39 (UTC)

Alternative is clearer for me; similar to films or TV show quotes, and more descriptive than the current one. I prefer it. It is not readable if we need to refer another page always. --Aphaia 3 July 2005 11:52 (UTC)
looks good. you might want to reword it away from "entering the sidewalk", but otherwise, I think that's worth changing to. — boredzo (talk) 2005-07-03 12:03:47 (UTC)
OK, done. ~ MosheZadka (Talk) 3 July 2005 12:15 (UTC)
Thank you, guys ;-) --Aphaia 3 July 2005 14:27 (UTC)
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